Makayla
23rd March St Patrick
WALT
retell a story.
WWBSWW tell the story in our own words.
Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing
and what he didn't like doing
- where he was born - what his family was
like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling
his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs
(swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was
happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him
to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship
grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork
dinner and apple sauce
There was
a boy called Patrick, he was born somewhere in Britain. Patrick had a very
happy life I fact his parents were rich. Patrick and his family lived in a
massive villa. One day
Patrick said he was going to school but Patrick went to the beach. Patrick was
playing around climbing trees and having fun. Patrick was walking on the sand
until Patrick froze he felled like someone was watching him. Patrick had turned
he saw a pirates, the pirates had stolen Patrick and all the other kid in the
village. Patrick went to Ireland and got sold to Milchu. Patrick was a shepherd
and Patrick looked after swine. Patrick started talking to god and all was trusted
god. Patrick lived happy like this. one night Patrick heard something talking
to him he was in shock because they're was nobody else in the room but him then
he released it God. God told Patrick to go to his ship. Patrick was on board
until there was a storm. the ship grounded to France. Patrick and the crew were
starving. Then Patrick had an idea to ask God for some help. God sent Patrick
and the crew some pigs and an apple tree. So Patrick and the crew had some pork
and apple sauce.
